
Originally Posted by
Abu Uthman
Wa`alaykum us-salaam
I thought I'd refine my numbers so I watched the first three parts. What you wrote at the top of the board is cut off at one point (in the second part) but I don't think you wrote anything more than طالب. Other than that, so far, it's a good lesson.
From a production aspect, ease off with the cheesy SFX and scrap the "Directed by Mu`awiyah Tucker" lol, I'm sure iMovie has some more "professional" effects! One last thing, maybe you could add transitions where you stop and start recording so the recording doesn't just "jump".
Anyway, I don't know if this was the sort of feedback you were looking for...
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